Monday, February 29, 2016

Pb3A

The article I chose to use was Charles Bazerman’s A Relationship between Reading and Writing: The Conversation Model published by the National Council of Teachers of English in February 1980. The main point of the article stressed this idea that reading is just a conversation with the writer and that it goes both ways. According to Bazerman, when a reader or student responds to a text, he or she is participating and building off that conversation. As the text goes on, new material will shift the discussion. Bazerman goes on to say it’s best to prepare students and help them develop their writing by incorporating techniques to help them. One way to talk back in a text would be responding and writing on the margins. Other exercises he included were reading journals and informal reaction essays (sound familiar?). Each of these would create places for students to make connections, to argue with the writer, to relate to an idea, to react, to disagree, and to think about the meaning of the text. All three techniques and exercises can serve as tools for heightening student understanding.
              For an older audience, I was thinking of creating a lesson plan that involved these ideas. Im not sure if that counts for an older audience but I think it does, since you know teachers are from an older audience. A lesson plan comes to mind because I took a linguistics/education course last year where we had to write our own lesson plan with a group. We even took it the next step and presented to our section class. So I can use that as guide and take that ‘expert’ role. Some topics that I can include in the lesson plan are ‘Paraphrasing’, ‘Summary’ or I can go more technical and use something like ‘Ways to Enter the Conversation’ and ‘Analysis of Technique’. If the lesson plan doesn’t work out I can try making blog specifically for Bazerman’s idea with the intended audience being an up and coming teachers.
              For the younger audience, I was thinking of making a SparkNotes page that incorporated these ideas from the reading. Throughout middle school and even high school, I relied on SparkNotes so I'm confident that the younger audience still uses this resource. For me, I used it for other things not just novels and books so I feel like the Bazerman reading can still be applied here. I can include a breakdown of Bazerman’s reading and really condense the information or go another route. If the SparkNotes page turns out short, I can even include a sample students notes on the page/reading. This would take Bazerman’s ideas of paraphrasing and summarizing and actually apply them.

              Overall, I think that both of these ideas need a little tweaking before I can start on them. I decided to use the genres of lesson plans and SparkNote postings because the Bazerman reading revolved around teaching and students. At first, I was really intimidated by this working project but I think it’s not as bad as it seems. 

6 comments:

  1. Raya,

    Seems to me like you’ve got the main gist of Bazerman’s piece on lockdown—academic writing is, in many ways, an ongoing and never-ending “conversation” amongst scholars, so it makes sense to try to have students to see it in this same way, and thus, actively engage in it in conversational-y ways.

    I like your lesson plan idea because, as you stated, this model is intended to be an educational tool. And I also think it’s great that you’ve gotten prior experience with this in your other courses. However, I don’t love how unspecific your ideas are—what, exactly, is going to be in this lesson plan? Paraphrase and summary, as you stated? Is it going to be an LP for 1 course? Or small unit like our WPs? And in what course, exactly? At what point in the course? And in what college? Even though you have some experience with writing LPs, I think that a successful execution of this genre will take a smallish amount of background research. Have specific goals in mind and think rhetorically as often as you can. I know you can pull all this off, but I have some high hopes for you here, and I want you to make it as good as you can. ☺

    Re your younger piece, I’m not seeing the connection between Bazerman’s convo model and Sparknotes. How would Sparknotes bring the convo model to life? Aren’t they, in some ways, at odds with each other? Doesn’t one seek to bring students INTO the conversation and other just asks students to regurgitate/know the “facts”? I think you need to some more thinking on this one, but you’re other one looks good to go (once you get a lot more specific with it, that is).

    Z

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  2. Perfect! Use what we do in class to guide you with this project. Our professors use a lot of these examples given in our writing & English lectures as well as in sections.
    I remember taking a Linguistic course like this last year, I think ti was Ling 187? Not entirely sure BUT I do know that we can still access our work for that quarter so if you are aiming towards the lesson plan maybe try going back and looking it up? I hope we are talking about the same class that way you can access it and maybe use that as a guide for your own lesson plan? You can even try incorporating that lesson plan into your own? Might be very helpful to just depict your own work :)

    Hmm for the younger audience maybe try using something from your lesson plan and just go into it a bit more? Or maybe like a group project in class where you read something and then break into groups to find the main point, thesis, etc. I remember doing these all through school.

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  3. Edweeeen,

    I think your ideas are off to a great start! I really like the idea of the lesson plan (mostly cause I was in ling 187 with you and cas lol). But seriously, I didn't even think of a lesson plan as a genre until I read this and its crazy because I used to write them for myself. In the actual lesson plan though what age group are you plan on tailoring it to? Because although all lesson plans are a genre for adults, the language and conventions will change depending on the educational level of students the lesson is intended for. As cas said above as well, I would also suggest looking at our work for that class and if you need it, I believe I still have the one we did saved. I think it would be a good starting point in beginning to produce this project.

    For your younger audience, I feel like Sparknotes is also a good idea to work with. In your WP I think you should explain more what sparknotes does for readers and since it does condense alot of information into short summaries, have a section on how you believe that would effect the authors original piece. Would it still get all the points across? Or will you have to compromise on what is most important and cut out less important aspects of the piece? And if you do that how will you decide what is and isn't important? Just a few thoughts!
    -Junior

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  4. Hey Edwin,

    First off, I really like the article that you picked as well as the way you explained it. I think that the concept of reading being just a conversation with the writer is a good place to work from because it allows you to go in a lot of different directions.

    Creating a lesson plan out of this could be really awesome and my mind immediately went to interactive classes that I had in high school. Things like chalk talks happened consistently in high school for me and I think that engaging with even just one part of any given text can be super interesting. Providing a lesson plan that teaches the ability to engage in conversation with a piece of writing is also really cool especially when it's phrased that way. The word "annotation" has come to make me cringe every time I hear it because in high school it became that tedious process I had to do every time I read a book that took all of the joy out of it for me. I think a lesson plan that teaches you to engage with a text as though it is a conversation could be a really great tool for teachers which I think would be the goal of you writing this lesson plan. :)

    I would love to hear more about where you want to take the sparknotes page because honestly I'm not very familiar with it (having never used it before). I think the idea definitely has potential and am curious as to where you planned to take it.

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  5. Edwin,
    I really loved your ideas! I think it's a great idea because it demonstrates knowledge on the subject and it engages people. I also really liked the spark notes idea because I was definitely a user of this resource when I was younger and I feel like the people on there really break down things s you can understand them even if you have minimal background information about the topic, so that's awesome! I definitely think with the children version you should add some pictures or something colorful depending of what age range you're targeting? To keep them engaged on of a kind of dry topic. Also, how would you go about the spark notes? Would it be bullet points of facts or...? Be sure to make it fun, because little kids are the devil and get impatient pretty quickly.

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  6. Edwin,
    I think your idea for a lesson plan is an excellent and it definitely applies to an older audience. My question is, what kind of conventions are in a lesson plan, and how much of your article are you planning on including in the lesson plan? Would it be effective to break down the article into sections and then make each section a lesson for one day of class or something similar to that?
    I also think the SparkNotes idea is pretty good, I know I used it a lot in high school. I think that it should be pretty easy to fit all of the content of your article in a short summary, but if not it could be be a good idea to do some vocab words or section analysis instead of student notes (I know that was always helpful when I read SparkNotes). Overall I think you have some interesting ideas and you're on track for a great WP3!

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